Tuesday, November 12, 2013

I Heard a Whisper - By Ramonadel

It was early in the morning cold and windy jack and his dad David was planning to go and on a adventure. Jack was playing with his friend once he came in the house they were packing their stuff and moving the table somewhere else. Jack said “ mum what is happening?” and the mum said “ we are going to have a party to night and then were are going to leave” jack said “ leave where?” we are going to go to another place” the mum said. Jack felt sad because he will be missing his friends.

The party has started Jack was up stairs with his friend play the same game it was the favourite game ever. The mum said “ jack we are leaving now” Jack was racing down the steps he stopped and he look at his house and he went to the car once he had finished saying good bye he leaned over to his mum and his mum hugged him. jack was sleeping while they were on their way to their new house once they have got their his mum woke him up and he slowly opened his eyes once he saw the house straight away he didn’t like it. Because it was surrounded by trees. jack heard a whisper when he went there but he wasn't scared because he was a brave little boy and he was only eight years old. Jack and his sister Lilly had to go find their bedroom Jack had a not really big one just a small simple room.

Jack was playing out side by himself because he was bored and had noone to play with but then after that he heard the same whisper again and he saw like a secret door that lead and the backyard he went in this sort of looking shed his mum saw him and then mum said “ hey what are you doing?” And jack said “ I am exploring” “okay” the mum said. He saw a window he opened his and went running through the woods until he saw a fence he went there and it was like a prison he saw a little boy and he was starving and Jack gave him a snack and the little boy that was in the prison was happy he has eaten.

He thanked Jack and the bell rang and he had to go and when jack went back home he never heard that voice again. And after then he kept going to that boy every day when it is 12 o'clock.

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