Thursday, April 7, 2011

When it Rains - By Eleva

When it rains at playtime it is so sad because we don’t get much time to play outside. At bedtime when the rains at night the splashes on my roof
sound like popcorn. It feels so cold and
I snuggle down in my blanket and I feel warm.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Eleva,

    I love your use of the words ‘popcorn’ and ‘snuggle’. I read the word popcorn and it reminds me of the rain on my roof and how hard rain can be. Then I read snuggle and it reminded me how I feel safe and warm inside my house when it rains so hard out side.

    Thank you


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